Wednesday, 22 May 2013

The Haunted House!

There was  a  village called  Shettihally .There  lived  a   family and their  children  named  as  Arshitha, Nikitha, Rakesh , and  

They  were playing  in  the  playground  .They  saw  a  house. They  thought it is  a  normal  house. But it was a Haunted House. They  entered it, to  see who 's  living  there.

After sometime the house turned in to dark .But they thought the  
lights are off . They  went in different ways.

Arshitha saw a doll and a dress for it .She likes it but they asked her a question. She din't answer. So the devil took her.

Nikitha went to a room. It was full of jewellery .She liked jewellery first of all. Nikitha kept one necklace in her bag. A devil came and asked "Who's this  house?". She told "It's my house!",  but she told the wrong answer .So the devil took Nikitha.

Rakesh was intrested in playing  board games.It was snake and ladder to play .but their was one condition if the snake bites him he should go with the devil .There was only one chance. He missed that chance. So the devil took Rakesh away.

So there was only boy left that was Anirudh. He was very 
intelligent. A devil  asked a question "you were going in a bike,
one side few people will be fighting, and on the other side they will be crying which one you stop will first?". Anirudh told  "I  will stop my bike first!". He gave the right answer, So the devil and the haunted house was blasted.

This news reached the villagers of Shettihally. People were happy, safe and enjoyed their life happily!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          


  1. the haunted house :) nice one putty too be as intelligent as Anirudh :)
    keep going ..nice job between

  2. I remember I have made a series of haunted houses around Karnataka in early 2K.

    superb narration, keep it up. :)

    1. thank you Badrinath uncle .
      nima coment nanige estavayetu uncle

  3. Good one sheetal..keep it up

  4. ಕೂಸೇ...
    ನಿನ್ನ ಕಲ್ಪನಾ ಶಕ್ತಿಗೊಂದು ಶರಣು... ಬರೆಯೋ ರೀತಿ, ಕತೆಗೆ ಅಂತ್ಯ ಒದಗಿಸಿದ ರೀತಿಯಿಂದ ಸಿಕ್ಕಾಪಟ್ಟೆ ಇಂಪ್ರೆಸ್ಸ್ ಆಗಿದ್ದೇನೆ ಸೊಸೆಯೇ....
    ಸೂಪರ್... ಸೂಪರ್... ಸೂಪರ್...

    -ಸುಷ್ಮಾ ಮೂಡುಬಿದಿರೆ..

  5. thank you very very very nice my sweet akka

  6. ಕೊನೆಯಲ್ಲಿ ಎಲ್ಲರೂ ಸುಖವಾಗಿದ್ದರು ಎಂಬಂತೆ ಇದೆ, ಆದರೆ ಆ ಮೂವರು ಎಲ್ಲಿ ಹೋದರು ?

    ಇಲ್ಲಿ ಕ್ಲಿಕ್ ಮಾಡಬೇಡಿ...!

  7. good one.... more details please :)