Once upon a time there lived a Family in Koravangala .
It was a family of Rangaswamy and Subbanarasamma, my great
grand parents.
Gowri, Ramaswamy, Nagalakshmi, Manjunanth, Krishnaswamy, Nagraja, and Kumarswamy were their children.
A few years ago Five brothers (Ramaswamy, Manjunanth,
Krishnaswamy, Nagraja, and Kumarswamy)got married, and
they got children.
They are Vijay, Chandru, Swamy, Subbu, Krishnaveni, Leela
Srikanth, Nagaveni, Kanaka, Annapurna, Deepak, Karthik,
Narendra, Jnaneshwara Rajneesh and Murali.
My father told me about his childhood, am trying to write in my own way.
1. One day Murali ,Srikanth with their parents went for a
shopping. Murali saw a slide infront of a house. He went their
to play. Suddenly his father pulled him, and Murali broke his teeth.
Murali cried, and mother gave biscuits and water.
2. One day Srikanth took 50 paise to by a cycle for rent. He went
to his friend's house and asked him "let's go doubles on the cycle
his friend said "No...No". Srikanth requested, then he came.
Srikanth while riding a cycle, he dashed to a tree, and his
friend fell in to a dust bin .So his mother scolded him.
3. One day srikanth and murali played chowka bhaara. They took
groundnut and kadale. While playing Murali, ate kadale, and said
am the winner.
It continues......................
fantastic soper sheetal, , i like it
ReplyDeletekeep writing . good girl.
nimagintha astu chenagi nanu bariualla uncle
DeleteWelcome to the youngest writer among us.
ReplyDeleteThe language usage here remembered me RKN.
Nice to read and enjoy father's childhood. Now I can remember my mischievous childhood. Thanks dear.
Narration 50/100 + Concept 50/100 = 100/100
thank you for welcoming me . thank you very much uncle
Deletewaw...puttu really nice ...at the age of 11 you done a wow job really ....shrikantanna take a bow you got a very talented,pretty cute daughter :)
ReplyDeleteexpecting your next write up putti :)
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yes appa teach me a lot . Akka thank you
Deleteenjoyed your writing.... lovely first post.. keep it coming
ReplyDeletethank you very much nivi aunti
DeleteNice Putti.......
ReplyDeletethank you my favaourite anna
Deleteಆತ್ಮೀಯ ಶೀತಲೆಗೆ
ReplyDeleteಬರವಣಿಗೆ ಚೆನ್ನಾಗಿ . ಮು೦ದುವರೆಸಿಕೊ೦ಡು ಹೋಗು. ಮತ್ತೆ ಇ೦ಗ್ಲಿಷಲ್ಲೇ ಬರೀಬೇಕಾ ಪುಟ್ಟ. ನೀನು ಬರೆದಿರೋದು ಕನ್ನಡದ ಹೆಸರುಗಳು ಮತ್ತು ಆಟಗಳು ಕೂಡ ಇಲ್ಲಿನವೇ ಅಲ್ವಾ? ನೀನು ಮಾತಾಡೋ ಭಾಷೆಯಲ್ಲೇ ಬರೆದ್ರೆ ಇನ್ನೂ ಸೊಗಸಾಗಿ ಬರೀತಿ.
ಬರೆಯೋದ್ನ ನಿಲ್ಲಿಸ್ಬೇಡ ಆದರೆ ನಿನ್ನ ಭಾಷೆಯಲ್ಲಿ ಬರಿ
ಹರೀಶ್ ಆತ್ರೇಯ
Child writing about father's Childhood....interesting.
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to the series.
Congratulations on your first post.
thank you swarna aunti
Deletenice it is
ReplyDeleteVery nice Sheetal... ಬೆಳೆಯುವ ಪೈರು ಮೊಳಕೆಯಲ್ಲಿ ಎನ್ನುತ್ತಾರೆ... ... Keep it up!
ReplyDeletethank you " ಬೆಳೆಯುವ ಪೈರು ಮೊಳಕೆಯಲ್ಲಿ ಎನ್ನುತ್ತಾರೆ.."i like this dialog pradeep uncle
DeleteNice write up Sheethal. keep up the good work:)
ReplyDeletethank you sulatha akka very much
Deleteಮುದ್ದು ಪುಟ್ಟು...
ReplyDeleteಬ್ಲಾಗ್ ಲಿ ಬರೆದ ಮೊದಲ ಬರಹವೇ ಸಕ್ಕತ್ತಾಗಿದೆ.. ಚಂದ ಬರೀತಿಯಾ ನಗು ಉಕ್ಕಿಸಿದ ಬರಹ..
ಬೆಳೆಯುವ ಪೈರು ಮೊಳಕೆಯಲ್ಲಿ ಅಂತಾರೆ.. ನಿನ್ನ ನೋಡಿ ಆ ಗಾದೆ ಬರೆದಿದ್ದಾರೆ ನೋಡು :)
ಪ್ರೀತಿಯಿಂದ
-ಸುಷ್ಮಾ ಮೂಡುಬಿದಿರೆ.
thank you sushma akka .neev heladingene aythu
DeleteAww thats cute
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