Wednesday 15 May 2013

A Village Life!!!


Once  upon   a  time   there   lived   a   Family in Koravangala .
It was a family of Rangaswamy and Subbanarasamma, my great 
grand parents.   

Gowri, Ramaswamy, Nagalakshmi, Manjunanth, Krishnaswamy, Nagraja, and Kumarswamy were their children. 

A few  years  ago Five brothers (Ramaswamy, Manjunanth, 
Krishnaswamy, Nagraja, and Kumarswamy)got married, and 
they got children.
  
They are Vijay, Chandru, Swamy, Subbu, Krishnaveni, Leela 
Srikanth, Nagaveni, Kanaka, Annapurna, Deepak, Karthik, 
Narendra, Jnaneshwara Rajneesh and Murali.

My father told me about his childhood, am trying to write in my own way. 

1. One day Murali  ,Srikanth with their parents went for a  
shopping. Murali  saw a slide infront of a house.  He went their  
to play. Suddenly his father pulled him, and Murali broke his teeth.  
Murali cried, and mother gave biscuits and water. 

2. One day Srikanth took 50 paise to by a cycle for rent. He  went  
to his friend's house and asked him "let's go doubles on the cycle  
his  friend said "No...No".  Srikanth  requested, then he  came. 
Srikanth while riding a cycle, he dashed to a tree, and his 
friend fell in to a dust bin .So his mother  scolded  him. 

3. One day srikanth and murali played  chowka bhaara. They took  
groundnut and kadale. While playing Murali, ate kadale, and said 
am the winner. 

It continues......................

21 comments:

  1. fantastic soper sheetal, , i like it
    keep writing . good girl.

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    1. nimagintha astu chenagi nanu bariualla uncle

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  2. Welcome to the youngest writer among us.

    The language usage here remembered me RKN.

    Nice to read and enjoy father's childhood. Now I can remember my mischievous childhood. Thanks dear.

    Narration 50/100 + Concept 50/100 = 100/100

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    1. thank you for welcoming me . thank you very much uncle

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  3. waw...puttu really nice ...at the age of 11 you done a wow job really ....shrikantanna take a bow you got a very talented,pretty cute daughter :)
    expecting your next write up putti :)
    thumbs up

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  4. enjoyed your writing.... lovely first post.. keep it coming

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  5. ಆತ್ಮೀಯ ಶೀತಲೆಗೆ
    ಬರವಣಿಗೆ ಚೆನ್ನಾಗಿ . ಮು೦ದುವರೆಸಿಕೊ೦ಡು ಹೋಗು. ಮತ್ತೆ ಇ೦ಗ್ಲಿಷಲ್ಲೇ ಬರೀಬೇಕಾ ಪುಟ್ಟ. ನೀನು ಬರೆದಿರೋದು ಕನ್ನಡದ ಹೆಸರುಗಳು ಮತ್ತು ಆಟಗಳು ಕೂಡ ಇಲ್ಲಿನವೇ ಅಲ್ವಾ? ನೀನು ಮಾತಾಡೋ ಭಾಷೆಯಲ್ಲೇ ಬರೆದ್ರೆ ಇನ್ನೂ ಸೊಗಸಾಗಿ ಬರೀತಿ.
    ಬರೆಯೋದ್ನ ನಿಲ್ಲಿಸ್ಬೇಡ ಆದರೆ ನಿನ್ನ ಭಾಷೆಯಲ್ಲಿ ಬರಿ
    ಹರೀಶ್ ಆತ್ರೇಯ

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  6. Child writing about father's Childhood....interesting.
    Looking forward to the series.
    Congratulations on your first post.

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  7. Very nice Sheetal... ಬೆಳೆಯುವ ಪೈರು ಮೊಳಕೆಯಲ್ಲಿ ಎನ್ನುತ್ತಾರೆ... ... Keep it up!

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    1. thank you " ಬೆಳೆಯುವ ಪೈರು ಮೊಳಕೆಯಲ್ಲಿ ಎನ್ನುತ್ತಾರೆ.."i like this dialog pradeep uncle

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  8. Nice write up Sheethal. keep up the good work:)

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  9. ಮುದ್ದು ಪುಟ್ಟು...
    ಬ್ಲಾಗ್ ಲಿ ಬರೆದ ಮೊದಲ ಬರಹವೇ ಸಕ್ಕತ್ತಾಗಿದೆ.. ಚಂದ ಬರೀತಿಯಾ ನಗು ಉಕ್ಕಿಸಿದ ಬರಹ..
    ಬೆಳೆಯುವ ಪೈರು ಮೊಳಕೆಯಲ್ಲಿ ಅಂತಾರೆ.. ನಿನ್ನ ನೋಡಿ ಆ ಗಾದೆ ಬರೆದಿದ್ದಾರೆ ನೋಡು :)

    ಪ್ರೀತಿಯಿಂದ
    -ಸುಷ್ಮಾ ಮೂಡುಬಿದಿರೆ.

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    1. thank you sushma akka .neev heladingene aythu

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